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Clarification and Homework

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2022-06-23 685

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Hello, T. donna. Thank you for teaching me well today.

Before I do my homework, I think I should correct my mistake.
We talked about check-up.
Actually, I didn't understand what you meant exactly.
I thought that you said 'general check-up'
So, I was trying to tell you that the government let us take general check-up for free every 2 years in Korea.
And I wanted to tell you that all Koreans have health insurance.
Thus if they have any medical problem, they can see a doctor for affordable price.
Usually the government pay for 70% of the medical payment.
However, for all aesthetic problem (including whitening laser, filler, botulinum toxin, face lifting, fat reduction) a client pay for it 100%.
I didn't remember all the details you said that.
So, if you have any question about it, let me know please.


I absolutely prefer home-cooked meals than eat-out foods.
Because I eat-out everyday. so I am sick of it.
Of course, sometimes I crave some eat-out food.
What about you?

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Hi, Dr. Kim!

Thank you very much for answering all my inquiries in class today. I was actually asking about the government medical payment of 70% that you have clearly stated here on your clarification. Moreover, the 100 payment of whitening laser, filler, botulinum toxin, face lifting, fat reduction, etc. was also clear as they are non-emergency and non-health threatening treatments.

Well, eating out is fun and convenient to avoid long food preparation, washing the dishes, and a respite from home-cooked food every once in a while. Hence, I hope you are a fan of your wife's homecooked meals as well as your children. By the way, around 80% of your sentences were grammatically correct as you explained your clarification and homework answer, great job! 

Meanwhile, as for me, I cook home meals and my son is kind of 'healthier' than usual, so I guess he speaks of the food I make. I go out and eat in restaurants and only order food I cannot make. So bon appetit! Have a healthy and sumptuous lunch!

Happy birthday to your wife and have an enjoyable weekend with your family!

-T. Donna =)

Hello, T. donna. Thank you for teaching me well today.
>> Correct!
Or:T. Donna

Before I do my homework, I think I should correct my mistake.
>> Correct!

We talked about check-up.
>> Correct!

Actually, I didn't understand what you meant exactly.
>> Correct!

I thought that you said 'general check-up'
>> Correct!
Or: I thought that you said 'general check-up'.

So, I was trying to tell you that the government let us take general check-up for free every 2 years in Korea.
>> Correct!

And I wanted to tell you that all Koreans have health insurance.
>> Correct!

Thus if they have any medical problem, they can see a doctor for affordable price.
>> Correct!
Or: Thus if they have any medical problem, they can see a doctor for an affordable price.

Usually the government pay for 70% of the medical payment.
>> Correct!
Or: Usually the government pays for 70% of the medical expenses.

However, for all aesthetic problem (including whitening laser, filler, botulinum toxin, face lifting, fat reduction) a client pay for it 100%.
>> However, for all aesthetic problem (including whitening laser, filler, botulinum toxin, face lifting, fat reduction) a client pays for it 100%.

I didn't remember all the details you said that.
>> I didn't remember all the details you said about that.

So, if you have any question about it, let me know please.
>> Correct!


I absolutely prefer home-cooked meals than eat-out foods.
>> Correct!

Because I eat-out everyday. so I am sick of it.
>> Correct!
Or: Because I eat-out everyday so I am sick of it.

Of course, sometimes I crave some eat-out food.
>> Of course, sometimes I crave for some eat-out food.

What about you?
>> Correct!
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