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How long do you get ready for work?

작성자: 전*채
2022-06-23 424

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I spend my time about 40 minutes to get ready for work every morning. I think it's a short time. Prepar time should be short. Because I have to sleep more in the morning. Go my time is so tight.
As soon an I woke up I brushed my teeth. And washed my hair. I didn't dry my hair perfectly because I didn't have many time. So I just dry naturally
And I maked up my face very simply. When I go to the work. I didn't dressed up. I didn't spend my time for what to wear. I just wear what I see. Because I just work only today.

But if I have a appointment after work with my friends. I woke up early and I make up face more, I dressed up with care. On days like that, my company crew said me. " you have an appointment after work! You look different today" Then I feel little bit awkward. It's obvious that I have a schedule.

In colclusion, nomally I didn't spent my time long to get ready for work because I wanna sleep more!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Chae!
I am glad to see your homework today.  Keep on answering your activities so you could increase your knowledge and improve for the better. ^^

~T. Maine


I spend my time about 40 minutes to get ready for work every morning. 
>> I spend about 40 minutes of my time getting ready for work every morning. 
I think it's a short time. 
>> Correct. 
Prepar time should be short. 
>> Preparing on time should be short and quick. 
Because I have to sleep more in the morning. 
>>It is because I have to sleep more in the morning. 
Go my time is so tight.
>>The time going to work is so tight. 
As soon an I woke up I brushed my teeth. And washed my hair. 
>>As soon as I wake up, I brush my teeth and then wash my hair. 
I didn't dry my hair perfectly because I didn't have many time. 
>> I don't completely dry my hair because I don't have a lot of time. 
So I just dry naturally
>>So I just naturally do it. 
And I maked up my face very simply. 
>>And I put a simple makeup on my face. 
When I go to the work.  I didn't dressed up. 
>>When I go to work, I don't need to dress up. 
I didn't spend my time for what to wear. 
>> I don't spend most of my time thinking what to wear. 
I just wear what I see. 
>>I just put on what I see in my closet. 
Because I just work only today.
>>It is because I just work today. 
But if I have a appointment after work with my friends.  I woke up early and I make up face more, I dressed up with care. 
>>But if I have an appointment after work with my friends, I wake up early, put makeup on my face, and dress up with care.  
On days like that, my company crew said me. " you have an appointment after work! 
>>Only on days like that that my colleagues recognize and tell me that I have an appointment after work. 
You look different today" Then I feel little bit awkward. 
>> They say that I look different on that day, so I feel a bit awkward. 
It's obvious that I have a schedule.
>>It's actually obvious that I have a schedule after work. 
In colclusion, nomally I didn't spent my time long to get ready for work because I wanna sleep more!
>> In conclusion, I don't want to spend more time preparing for work because I want to sleep more. 


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