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What is your hatest food and why?

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My hatest food is a cow intestine. If I try to eat it, I'll get enteritis. I don't why doing it. Maybe because my stomach is very sensitive. :)

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Hi Elic!  

Me too. My stomach is very sensitive so I can't eat those kinds of food. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

My hatest food is a cow intestine. 
>>The food that I hate the most is cow intestines. 

If I try to eat it, I'll get enteritis. 
>> CORRECT

I don't why doing it. 
>> I don't know why. 

Maybe because my stomach is very sensitive. :)
>> Maybe it is because my stomach is very sensitive. 
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