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I had a good time in the morning. same as yesterday.
Thanks to you.

Homework.

On weekend,
Sometimes I want to take a rest at home and sometimes I want to go out and do some activities with my family and friends.

There is a park (named Central Park) near my house.

And we can ride a bicycle or a small boat in the park. (I don't own my boat, I mean we can rent one for a short time)

Many people like it.

And I like to invite my friends to my house, share some delicious foods(like meat, crab, raw fish...) with alcohol(whisky, beer, so-ju, wine...).
Actually I like to drink in daytime.
And i can only do that on weekend.

As i told you, we also (means my family including me) enjoy Hotel vacation.

However, I sometimes take a rest all day when I am completely exhausted.

Now I want to know your weekend life.
Can you tell me what you like to do on weekend?

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Hello there, Dr. Kim!

First of all, your writing today was very strong-all of your sentences are correct, excellent job! Your activities are relaxing and interesting at the same time. Accessing the bike and boat area is just awesome.

To answer your question on what I like to do over the weekend, it is actually to do another part time job which is emceeing/ hosting events in my city. This makes me feel so alive and energized. I go to the radio early in the morning on Saturdays and Sundays for my show and I host in the late afternoon towards the evening. This is what powers me up on weekends.

All of us need to relax and have time for ourselves. Some keep their weekends busy and highly enjoyable. So, let's look forward to the weekend though it is still more than a couple of days from now.^^

See you!

-T. Donna =)

I had a good time in the morning. same as yesterday.
Thanks to you.
>> Correct!
Or: I had a good time in the morning same as yesterday.
Thanks to you.


Homework.

On weekend,
Sometimes I want to take a rest at home and sometimes I want to go out and do some activities with my family and friends.
>> Correct!

There is a park (named Central Park) near my house.
>> Correct!

And we can ride a bicycle or a small boat in the park. (I don't own my boat, I mean we can rent one for a short time)
>> Correct!

Many people like it.
>> Correct!

And I like to invite my friends to my house, share some delicious foods(like meat, crab, raw fish...) with alcohol(whisky, beer, so-ju, wine...).
>> Correct!

Actually I like to drink in daytime.
>> Correct!

And i can only do that on weekend.
>> Correct!
Or: I 

As i told you, we also (means my family including me) enjoy Hotel vacation.
>> Correct!
Or: I

However, I sometimes take a rest all day when I am completely exhausted.
>> Correct!

Now I want to know your weekend life.
>> Correct!

Can you tell me what you like to do on weekend?
>> Correct!
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