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How do you keep in touch with your relatives and friends?

작성자: 전*채
2022-06-21 622

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Usually I keep in touch my friends on the instagram and kakaotalk. When I see great restaurants or cafe on the post of instagram. I tag my friends and we talk an appointment.
I almost hang out my neighbor friends every weekend.

But my hometown friends who live in a hometown still. I can't see them often. So we talk about more kakaotalk and we ofen call. I meet hometown friends when holiday.

If I live in Seoul, when I want to keep in touch with person who interested and like. Then I find our common ground and try to meet that people. So I like people who similar with me.

I think the important thing of relation is a comfortable.
So I try to make comfortable relationship. That's the key point to maintain long relationship.

It's hard thing to me that keep in touch with people. I like an old friendship. It's difficult to make creative with unknown person.but I have to try to contact many people. Because I want to make a lot of friends. :) That's a lot of jargon. sorry. ^-^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Chae!
I hope you could read and notice your mistakes in grammar.  Learn simple grammar and start making simple sentences first, before moving to longer ones.  Reading books could be of great help to make you memorize and get used to English patterns and vocabulary.  Keep on learning! ^^


~T. Maine


Usually I keep in touch my friends on the instagram and kakaotalk. 
>>Usually, I keep in touch with my friends on Instagram and Kakaotalk. 
When I see great restaurants or cafe on the post of instagram. 
>>When I see great restaurants or cafes on their posts on Instagram, 
I tag my friends and we talk an appointment.
>>I tag my friends and we make an appointment. 
I almost hang out my neighbor friends every weekend.
>>I almost hang out with my neighboring friends every weekend. 
But my hometown friends who live in a hometown still. I can't see them often.
>>But I don't see my hometown friends who live in the same residences often.  
So we talk about more kakaotalk and we ofen call. 
>>So we talk more on Kakaotalk and we often call each other. 
I meet hometown friends when holiday.
>>I meet my friends on holidays. 
If I live in Seoul, when I want to keep in touch with person who interested and like. 
>>If I live in Seoul, I want to keep in touch with people who has the same interests as me. 
Then I find our common ground and try to meet that people. 
>> I find our common interests and try to meet that person. 
So I like people who similar with me.
>>So I like people who are similar to me. 
I think the important thing of relation is a comfortable.
>>I think the important thing in a relationship is to feel comfortable. 
So I try to make comfortable relationship. 
>>So I try to make comfortable relationship with anyone. 
That's the key point to maintain long relationship.
>>That's the key to maintain a long relationship. 
It's hard thing to me that keep in touch with people. 
>>It's hard for me to keep in touch with people. 
I like an old friendship. 
>>I treasure an old friendship. 
It's difficult to make creative with unknown person.but I have to try to contact many people. 
>>It's difficult to build a good relationship with strangers, but I have to try being close to many people.
Because I want to make a lot of friends. :) 
>> It is because I want to make a lot of friends. 

That's a lot of jargon. sorry. ^-^

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