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my think it is toy,cartoon, and study. because toy is make fun to the baby or children. cartoon is most children make imagination, and last one study is we learn study is important everyone.

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Hello, Teddy! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


my think it is toy,cartoon, and study.
>>> I think the most important for a happy childhood are watching cartoons, playing with toys, and studying. 

because toy is make fun to the baby or children. cartoon is most children make imagination, and last one study is we learn study is important everyone.
>>> Because playing with toys makes babies and children happy, watching cartoons gives children imagination. And lastly, studying because it is important for everyone. 
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