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The way how I spend my money usually is I spend my money half, and I save the other. I always save my half money. I save money because someday I want something expensive thing. Therefore, I save money for buy something in future. First way how I spend my money wisely is hang out with my friends. I spend a lot of money when I hang out. I have lunch, eat dessert, take photos, and do other many things with friends. Also I hang out every Sunday (sometimes at Saturday). When I back to home, I always think I spend perfect day and feel happy. Therefore, my way how to spend money wisely is save half money and use the rest money when you hang out with friends.

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Hi Bella!
I think you're ready for the weekend.
Thank you for your efforts this week.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The way how I spend my money usually is I spend my money half, and I save the other. 
>> The way I usually spend my money is to just spend half of it. 
I always save my half money. 
>> I always save half of my money.
I save money because someday I want something expensive thing. 
>> I save money because I want to buy something expensive someday.
Therefore, I save money for buy something in future. 
>> Therefore, I save money to buy something in the future. 
First way how I spend my money wisely is hang out with my friends. 
>> The first way to spend my money wisely is to hang out with my friends. 
I spend a lot of money when I hang out. 
>> Correct
I have lunch, eat dessert, take photos, and do other many things with friends. 
>> I have lunch, eat dessert, take photos, and do other  things with friends. 
Also I hang out every Sunday (sometimes at Saturday). 
>> Also, I hang out with them every Sunday (sometimes on Saturdays). 
When I back to home, I always think I spend perfect day and feel happy. 
>> When I get back home, I always feel that I had a perfect day and I feel happy. 
Therefore, my way how to spend money wisely is save half money and use the rest money when you hang out with friends.
>> Therefore, the way I spend money wisely is to save half of my money and use the rest to hang out with my friends.
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