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HOMEWORK:
Do you enjoy meeting new people? Answer in a few sentences.

I like meeting new people. I don't care about friend's age. So, I am friends with my students. I learn a lot from them.

Thank you advise to me. I'll keep it. Have a great weekend!

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Hello, Hae Ju!

Meeting new people from different backgrounds enrich our social skills as well as experiences vacariately. They may have some encounters that we may never have and vice versa. Meeting a new person is like trying to open yourself into posibilities of connecting with them may it be regarding work, school, a group with common goals, etc.

Here on your answer, you had so many correct sentences, well done! I will never get tired advising you until one day, you will advice me too. So, thank you so much for this homework. 

See you tomorrow.

-T. Donna =)

I like meeting new people. 
>> Correct!

I don't care about friend's age. 
>> I don't care about a friend's age. 

So, I am friends with my students. 
>> Correct!

I learn a lot from them.
>> Correct!

Thank you advise to me.
>> Thanks to your advice to me.

 I'll keep it. Have a great weekend!
>> Correct!
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