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I think the best way to improve my imagination is seeing something fiction like watching movies, reading novels¡¦If we watch movies or read novel, we can imagine many things. When we watch movies or read novels, we sink into story and we feel like in that world. Therefore we can imagine many things from some movies and novels. My favorite movie is Harry Potter and the sorcerer¡¯s stone. When I seeing that movie, and I feel I am into Harry potter¡¯s world, too. Then I imagine about my collage, wand, broom, and many other things. Therefore, I think we can improve our imagination from fiction movies and novels.

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Hi Bella!
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You know what you want to say exactly.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I think the best way to improve my imagination is seeing something fiction like watching movies, reading novels¡¦
>> I think the best way to improve my imagination is reading or watching fiction like novels and movies. 
If we watch movies or read novel, we can imagine many things. 
>> If we watch movies or read novels, we can imagine many things. 
When we watch movies or read novels, we sink into story and we feel like in that world. 
>> When we watch movies or read novels, we sink into those stories and we feel like we are in another world. 
Therefore we can imagine many things from some movies and novels. 
>> Therefore, we can imagine many things from some movies and novels. 
My favorite movie is Harry Potter and the sorcerer¡¯s stone. 
>> Correct
When I seeing that movie, and I feel I am into Harry potter¡¯s world, too. 
>> When I see that movie, I feel like I am in Harry Potter¡¯s world, too. 
Then I imagine about my collage, wand, broom, and many other things. 
>> Then I imagine about my house, wand, broom, and many other things. 
Therefore, I think we can improve our imagination from fiction movies and novels.
>> Correct
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