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What is the longest book you have ever read?
When I was a element student, I read a "MOMO". That book is quite thick. I think that book is the longest book I have ever read. After finshing reading a book, I felt rewarded.

-She was transferred from my company to the other company. She looks like be good. We talked about decreasing of the company stock. We shared our project like experiment.
-I always need to carry the power supply line. Because ther is a blinking if I don't connect the power to laptop. After removing the data in laptop, it is fast.
- I think that skin career raiser is good at skin skin. The raiser stimulates the region under skin. So, it makes the easier environment to grow new skin.
-I have a related experience. When I prepared my mom's birthday gift. I took the picture of the gift and then text to my siblings. I did communication using text or video call. I think it could apply the question situation.

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Hi, Young!

Thank you for sharing about that!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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When I was a element student, I read a "MOMO". 
>> When I was an elementary student, I read a "MOMO". 
That book is quite thick. 
>> Correct!
I think that book is the longest book I have ever read. 
>> Correct!
After finshing reading a book, I felt rewarded.
>> After finishing reading a book, I felt rewarded.

-She was transferred from my company to the other company. 
>> Correct!
She looks like be good. 
>> She looks like good. OR She looks like doing better. 
We talked about decreasing of the company stock. 
>> We talked about the decreasing of the company stock. 
We shared our project like experiment.
>> We shared our project like the experiment.
-I always need to carry the power supply line. 
>> Correct!
Because ther is a blinking if I don't connect the power to laptop.
>> Because there is a blinking if I don't connect the power to the laptop.
After removing the data in laptop, it is fast.
>> After removing the data in the laptop, it became faster.
- I think that skin career raiser is good at skin skin. 
>> I think that skin career laser is good for the skin.
The raiser stimulates the region under skin. 
>>The laser stimulates the region under the skin. 
So, it makes the easier environment to grow new skin.
>> Correct!
-I have a related experience.
>> Correct!
When I prepared my mom's birthday gift.
>> Correct!
I took the picture of the gift and then text to my siblings. 
>> Correct!
I did communication using text or video call. 
>> Correct!
I think it could apply the question situation.
>> Correct!

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