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make a lot of money or enjoy your job?

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Do you think it is more important to make a lot of money or to enjoy your job?
I couldn't give up two things. We could enjoy my job with making money. I spend a lot of time in company. I consider the job is important to my life. But I think that job giving small salary is not easy to maintain. We are living in capitalism. We need the money for everything. Even if sometimes my job make stress, I'm satisfied with my job. Thanks to getting money. When I was a collage student, I didn't understand the capitalism. I have figured the capitalism, when I get a job. Actually, me and my husband is trying to get the economic freedom.

I don't need to always take a name tag. Because I could open the door without the name tag.

I have question about "some kind of" meaning. In last class, I answered "some kind of". When you ask me "Are you really don't want to follow your company policy?" My meaning is a little agree. I wonder that answer is proper answer.

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Hi, Young! 

Thank you for making time to answer the question and for sharing your opinion about it! 

Regarding your question, I will give you examples. The right answer should be "Kind of"  I think I misheard it. 

Some kind of- used to indicate that the speaker is referring to a range of items that could fit a description.
Example: I think I need some kind of a flower for the decoration. (You can use some kind of/ some type of/ some sort of)

Kind of(phrase)- used to respond or express vagueness or when you thought of something, but not exactly.) Synonyms- a little/ rather/ somewhat/ somehow / in a way.
Example: 
Question: Don't you think your house looks big?
Answer: Kind of! (You think that's it's big , but not sure as well)
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I couldn't give up two things. 
>> Correct! 
We could enjoy my job with making money. 
>>I could enjoy my job with making money. OR I could enjoy my job while making money. 
I spend a lot of time in company. 
>> I spend a lot of time in the company. 
I consider the job is important to my life. 
>> Correct! 
But I think that job giving small salary is not easy to maintain. 
>> But I think that a job giving a small salary is not easy to maintain. 
We are living in capitalism. 
>> Correct! 
We need the money for everything. 
>> Correct! 
Even if sometimes my job make stress, I'm satisfied with my job. 
>> Even if sometimes my job makes me stress, I'm satisfied with my job. 
Thanks to getting money. 
>> Correct! OR Thanks to earning money.
When I was a collage student, I didn't understand the capitalism. 
>> When I was a college student, I didn't understand the capitalism. 
I have figured the capitalism, when I get a job. 
>> Correct! 
Actually, me and my husband is trying to get the economic freedom.
>> Correct! 
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