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What do you have on your bucket list? What are the benefits of aging?

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On my bucket list, there are being an exchange student to other country, reading 10000 books for one year and making my own book about my life. Now, I didn't think about my bucket list yet, so I don't know what I want to do concretely. I can think just that 3 things like reading 10000 books. And I think that the benefits of aging is being wiser and having more experiences so I don't think about aging negatively. Eldery can help children well and give some advice to young men and young women well. So I wnat to live well and give much of advice and helps to young people.

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Hi Sally,
The focus of a bucket list is to live a life with hopes and aspirations. Making a bucket list allows us to reflect on our values and goals, and identify important milestones and experiences that we want to have in our lifetime. And by the time we get older and reach our senior years, we have a wealth of experience to guide us, and we can confidently face whatever life brings our way. You become Wiser and in addition to confidence, experience gives you more wisdom about life, relationships, going through hardships and so much more. "Enjoy your LIFE to be HAPPY" ~ Teacher QUENNY..

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On my bucket list, there are being an exchange student to other country, reading 10000 books for one year and making my own book about my life. 
>> On my bucket list, first is I want to be an exchange student t to other countries, read 10000 books for one year, and make my own book about my life or an "Autobiography Book".  
Now, I didn't think about my bucket list yet, so I don't know what I want to do concretely. 
>> Now, I didn't think about my bucket list yet, so I don't know what I want to do concretely.
I can think just that 3 things like reading 10000 books. 
>>  I can only think of just 3 things like reading 10000 books in a year. 
And I think that the benefits of aging is being wiser and having more experiences so I don't think about aging negatively. 
>> And I think that the benefits of aging are being wiser and having more experiences so I don't think about aging negatively. 
Eldery can help children well and give some advice to young men and young women well. 
>> The elderly people can help children well and they can give some advice to young men and young women well. 
So I wnat to live well and give much of advice and helps to young people.
>> 
So I want to live well and give a lot of pieces of advice to help young people when I get older. 
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On my bucket list, there are being an exchange student to other country, reading 10000 books for one year and making my own book about my life. Now, I didn't think about my bucket list yet, so I don't know what I want to do concretely. I can think just that 3 things like reading 10000 books. And I think that the benefits of aging is being wiser and having more experiences so I don't think about aging negatively. Eldery can help children well and give some advice to young men and young women well. So I wnat to live well and give much of advice and helps to young people.
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