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What do you think is the best job in the world? Why?

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What do you think is the best job in the world? Why?

There are many good jobs in the world.
Those jobs will make you a lot of money.
It depends on my personal preference and interest.
The best job is the one you feel good and love the job.

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Hi, Monica!

Thank you so much for answering your homework.
You did a good job here. Have a good weekend!^^


What do you think is the best job in the world? Why?

There are many good jobs in the world.
>>> CORRECT
Those jobs will make you a lot of money.
>>> You can make a lot of money from some of those jobs.
It depends on my personal preference and interest.
>>> CORRECT
The best job is the one you feel good and love the job.
>>> The best job is the one that makes you happy and that you enjoy doing.
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