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What are some superstitions in your country?

작성자: 황*하
2022-06-07 310

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There are a lot of superstitions here in Korea. It is bad manner to right someone's name with red color because it is known that it causes someone's death. We don't want to use number 4 in the building floor because it is death in chinese character, so we commonly use "F floor" instead of number 4. If someone dreams of pig or poop, it is a good omen, so most people tend to buy a lottery because they expect to win a lottery. The shallow is thought to bring good luck and is viewed as a positive figure. There are weird superstition that is sleeping with the fan terned on is believed to bring possible death. Many Koreans, especially elderly, strongly believe that is can cause lack of oxygen and hypothermia during sleep. If someone give shoes as a gift to one's partner, it is beileved that his/her partner might cheat on with other person. We believe that person who receive shoes will run away wearing it. The last superstition is about eating seaweed soup before taking a important test.

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


There are a lot of superstitions here in Korea. 
>> CORRECT!
It is bad manner to right someone's name with red color because it is known that it causes someone's death. 
>> It is bad manner to write someone's name with red-colored pen because it is known that it causes someone's death. 
We don't want to use number 4 in the building floor because it is death in chinese character, so we commonly use "F floor" instead of number 4. 
>> We don't want to use number 4 in the building floor because it is death in Chinese character, so we commonly use "F floor" instead of number 4. 
If someone dreams of pig or poop, it is a good omen, so most people tend to buy a lottery because they expect to win a lottery. 
>> If someone dreams of pig or poop, it is a good omen, so most people tend to buy a lottery ticket because they expect to win a lottery. 
The shallow is thought to bring good luck and is viewed as a positive figure. 
>> The swallow is thought to bring good luck and is viewed as a positive figure. 
There are weird superstition that is sleeping with the fan terned on is believed to bring possible death. 
>> There is a weird superstition that says sleeping with the fan turned on is believed to bring possible death. 
Many Koreans, especially elderly, strongly believe that is can cause lack of oxygen and hypothermia during sleep. 
>> CORRECT!
If someone give shoes as a gift to one's partner, it is beileved that his/her partner might cheat on with other person.
>> If someone give shoes as a gift to one's partner, it is believed that his/her partner might cheat on with another person.
We believe that person who receive shoes will run away wearing it. 
>> We believe that person who receive the shoes will run away, wearing it. 
The last superstition is about eating seaweed soup before taking a important test.
>> The last superstition is about eating seaweed soup before taking an important test.

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