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Are you a patient person? Is it difficult or easy for you? Is it important to be patient?

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Honestly, I am not a patient person. I made my own nickname as a 'speed girl'. It has three meanings. I'am fast to do something in business. And I like to enjoy speed. Moreover, I feel difficult to deal with something or someone too slow. It is hard to endure watching acting slowly. So if I have to do some project with a team, and someone doesn't do own work in time, I just do it by myself. It is comfortable then together. However, I know, it is not good atitude to have a community spirit. So I try to be patient before I feel annoying. Patience is one of the important virtue between people. But we don't have to force to have it in one side, we have to show the patience for each other. Then this society will be more warm and kind. I hope I can have more patiece for others and make them to have it, too.

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Hi Arissa,

Good evening and thank you for submitting your answer.
I'm glad that you're doing your best to be more patient. That's a great thing. 
I'm known as a patient person by my friends and family however, there are times when I also lose it. 
Well I guess, we're only humans. We have our shortcomings.  But still, the most important thing is we try to change it and become the better versions of ourselves everyday. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina

Honestly, I am not a patient person. I made my own nickname as a 'speed girl'. It has three meanings. I'am fast to do something in business. And I like to enjoy speed. Moreover, I feel difficult to deal with something or someone too slow. It is hard to endure watching acting slowly. So if I have to do some project with a team, and someone doesn't do own work in time, I just do it by myself. It is comfortable then together. However, I know, it is not good atitude to have a community spirit. So I try to be patient before I feel annoying. Patience is one of the important virtue between people. But we don't have to force to have it in one side, we have to show the patience for each other. Then this society will be more warm and kind. I hope I can have more patiece for others and make them to have it, too.

>> Honestly, I am not a patient person. I made my own nickname as a 'speed girl.' It has three meanings. I'm fast in doing something about business. And I like to enjoy speed. Moreover, I feel that it is difficult to deal with something or someone that is too slow. It is hard to endure watching someone acting slowly. So if I have to do some project with a team, and someone doesn't do their work in time, I just do it by myself. It is comfortable then together. However, I know it is not a good attitude to have a community spirit. So I try to be patient before I feel annoyed. Patience is one of the important virtue among people. But we don't have to force it to have it on one side. We have to show patience for each other. Then this society will be warmer and kind. I hope I can have more patience for others and make them have it too.
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