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How did the pandemic affect you the most?

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First, My career is terrible. I had nothing to do after graduation. Fortunately, I'm still working. Second, I don't have a chance to meet with someone. So sometimes I felt depressed, I can't meet. And last, everyone looks pretty with masks on in South Korea. That's why people say people look like celebrity when they wear a mask. :)

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Hi Elic!  

It really changed our lives drastically. :( Wearing a mask is very deceiving as well. hahaha

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

First, My career is terrible. 
>First, my career is terrible. 

I had nothing to do after graduation. 
>> CORRECT

Fortunately, I'm still working. 
>> CORRECT

Second, I don't have a chance to meet with someone. 
>> CORRECT

So sometimes I felt depressed, I can't meet. 
>> So sometimes I feel depressed when I can't socialize. 

And last, everyone looks pretty with masks on in South Korea. 
>> And last, everyone looks pretty with masks on in South Korea. 

That's why people say people look like celebrity when they wear a mask. :)
>> That's why people say that most of us look like celebrities when we wear a mask. :) 
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