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I enjoy listening to music to release my stress lately.
Because when I feel down, listening to music is healing for me.

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Hi Luis,

Thank you for sharing your answer. 
Listening to music is indeed one of the best ways to help get rid of stress from our system.
Music makes our life more colorful and lively. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina

I enjoy listening to music to release my stress lately.
Because when I feel down, listening to music is healing for me.

>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Recently, I have enjoyed listening to music to free myself from stress since I consider it a remedy when I feel down. 
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