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Why is getting along with people important? answer in a few sentences.

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People cannot be isolated from the society, and they have to learn how to treat others. Also, we are not a hero that can do anything, so we need the assistance from them. That¡¯s why getting along with people is important.

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Hello, Judy!

Truly, as social creatures, men will always be involed in interactions in most part of their lives. It is inevitable. Thus, we have to learn the skill to socialize in proper decorum and conduct ourselves accordingly.

Thank you so much for this lengthy answer.^^ It's a great joy seeing your sentences conveying sound thoughts for the homework question. Excellent job!

See you later!

-T. Donna =)

People cannot be isolated from the society, and they have to learn how to treat others. 
>> Correct!

Also, we are not a hero that can do anything, so we need the assistance from them. 
>> Also, we are not heroes who can do everything, so we need (the assistance from them/a hand from others) .

That¡¯s why getting along with people is important.
>> Correct!

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