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What do you think is the biggest contributing factor to young women not wanting to raise children of

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The career break would be the most significant factor. Still, it is rare for women in Korea to work while raising their children. I believe there are two reasons for such practices. First, Korean society has withstanding concept of mothers nurturing their children while fathers work. Even though such a concept has transformed as time went by, it only led women to balance their work and raising a child. A few years ago, research held that many female employees felt coworkers left them behind in terms of more opportunities after returning from maternity leave. The second is the lack of support. Many municipal governments provide childbirth grants. However, the demanding requirements prevent many parents from applying. On top of that, many companies lack a childcare system. Except for large conglomerates, many firms do not have resources for childcare purposes. Many companies do not have childcare allowance for employees.

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Thank you for this as well Aciel!

The career break would be the most significant factor. 
>>> correct   
Still, it is rare for women in Korea to work while raising their children.
>>>   correct 
I believe there are two reasons for such practices. 
>>>  correct  
First, Korean society has withstanding concept of mothers nurturing their children while fathers work. 
>>> correct   
Even though such a concept has transformed as time went by, it only led women to balance their work and raising a child. 
>>> OR: Even though such a concept has transformed as time went by, it only led to women balancing their work and raising a child.   
A few years ago, research held that many female employees felt coworkers left them behind in terms of more opportunities after returning from maternity leave. 
>>> OR: A few years ago, a research conducted stated that many female employees felt coworkers left them behind in terms of more opportunities after returning from maternity leave.   
The second is the lack of support. 
>>>   correct  
Many municipal governments provide childbirth grants. 
>>>    correct 
However, the demanding requirements prevent many parents from applying. 
>>>    correct 
On top of that, many companies lack a childcare system. 
>>>    correct 
Except for large conglomerates, many firms do not have resources for childcare purposes. 
>>>    correct 
Many companies do not have childcare allowance for employees.
>>>   correct  

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