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Are robots more efficient than people? Share your answer in a few sentences.

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Robot is efficient than people. But, if the budget is so expensive, generally we can't use it. Price of Robot must go to the more generally. than a lot of people can save there time, and they use more good way.

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Good day, Jisu!

Robots can do things accurately as programmed. All we have to do is to adjust the settings and they will work as we wish. You are right, they can be expensive too. They need maintenance just like any other machine.

Thank you for your well crafted sentences. Your ideas are logical as well as practical. Watch out for some  suggestions made, they are very simple.

See you!

-T. Donna =)

Robot is efficient than people. 
>> Robots are more efficient than people. 

But, if the budget is so expensive, generally we can't use it. 
>> Correct!

Price of Robot must go to the more generally. 
>> The price of robots must be more expensive generally.

than a lot of people can save there time, and they use more good way.
>> Then, a lot of people can save their time, and they can use it more in good ways.
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