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As mentioned in the article, the solution is environment-friendly planning and other changes to tackle the global warming issues. I agree with the author's idea. I believe a building planning system would be related to an insulation system for an old-fashioned complex. It is not highly applicable in APAC regions. The buildings in Europe are from the late 1800 or 1900, making them vulnerable to extreme weather. Renovating the building structure would reduce the impact of heat and humidity. If we restrict the solution to the floor plans, there could be another solution by constructing the new complex with well-ventilated resources. Also, planting trees near the building complex could be a solution. Since forests surround my place, the trees absorb the light during the summer, so the overall temperature is not high compared to other sites. If it is difficult to plant trees due to land scarcity, we could consider making a rooftop garden.

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Than you for this Aciel! Keep them coming. :D

As mentioned in the article, the solution is environment-friendly planning and other changes to tackle the global warming issues. 
>>> correct   
I agree with the author's idea. 
>>> correct  
I believe a building planning system would be related to an insulation system for an old-fashioned complex. 
>>> OR: I believe the building planning system would be related to an insulation system of an old-fashioned complex.    
It is not highly applicable in APAC regions. 
>>>  correct   
The buildings in Europe are from the late 1800 or 1900, making them vulnerable to extreme weather. 
>>>  correct   
Renovating the building structure would reduce the impact of heat and humidity.
>>>   correct  
If we restrict the solution to the floor plans, there could be another solution by constructing the new complex with well-ventilated resources. 
>>>  correct   
Also, planting trees near the building complex could be a solution. 
>>>   correct  
Since forests surround my place, the trees absorb the light during the summer, so the overall temperature is not high compared to other sites.
>>>  OR: Since forests surround my place, the trees absorb the heat from the sunlight during summer, so the overall temperature is not high compared to other sites. 
 If it is difficult to plant trees due to land scarcity, we could consider making a rooftop garden.
>>>  correct 

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