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Next Wednesday is parliamentary election day.
So next Wednesday is holiday.
Korea is holiday but I'm not.
Next Wednesday I have a lot of class in my academy.

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Hi Ann! 
 
Oh that's a shame. I feel the same way actually. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

Next Wednesday is parliamentary election day.
>> Next Wednesday is the parliamentary election day.

So next Wednesday is holiday.
>> So it will be a holiday by that time. 

Korea is holiday but I'm not.
>> The rest of South Korea will be on a holiday except me. 

Next Wednesday I have a lot of class in my academy.
>> I will have a lot of classes during that day in the academy. 
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