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Writing Task(May 26th, 2022)

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What's the biggest issues your country facing right now?
One of the biggest issues has always been the nuclear threat of N. Korea. And since the Ukraine-Russia conflicts started, the treat has been severer than before. Maybe, N.Korea knows the importance of having the nuclear weapons because Ukraine doesn't have the weapon and that is why Russia invaded Ukraine easily.
And the other issue is the fact that the President is from People's Power Party, but two third of the members of Korean National Assembly who belong to the main opposition party take seats in the Assembly, which means the new Korean government has little power to try new policies

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Hi, U Seung! 

Oh, I've heard about that issue. That's really scary. Let's just hope everything will be okay. 

Thank you for sharing!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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One of the biggest issues has always been the nuclear threat of N. Korea.
>> Correct! 
And since the Ukraine-Russia conflicts started, the treat has been severer than before. 
>> And since the Ukraine-Russia conflicts started, the threat has been more severe than before. 
Maybe, N.Korea knows the importance of having the nuclear weapons because Ukraine doesn't have the weapon and that is why Russia invaded Ukraine easily.
>> Maybe, N. Korea knows the importance of having the nuclear weapons because Ukraine doesn't have the weapon and that is why Russia invaded Ukraine easily. 
And the other issue is the fact that the President is from People's Power Party, but two third of the members of Korean National Assembly who belong to the main opposition party take seats in the Assembly, which means the new Korean government has little power to try new policies
>>And the other issue is the fact that the President is from the People's Power Party, but two third of the members of the Korean National Assembly who belong to the main opposition party take seats in the Assembly, which means the new Korean government has little power to try new policies
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