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Are you a happy person?, Trip on Europe.

작성자: 유*영
2022-05-26 217

회원님의 영작문

Are you a happy person?
Yes, I think I am happy. Thinking that I am happy is important to living. Think makes the behaviors. How to think decides the furture. I try to away from person who are negative in my life. When I look back on my life. I was the lucky girl. I have the deligent parents and fun 4 siblings. (I somtimes conficts with siblings but I love my family.)
What makes you feel happy?
I think that going to my way makes the happy. Not compare to other people, just going my way. To get the goal which I set makes the happy. I set a goal to be rich unti I am 38 years old with my husband. I'm happy to doing with my husband.

I write down the answer about the question In last calss.
1. I have no experience in Europe. Traveling Europe requires a long period and a lot of money. I hope to travel Europe for a month. I want to be free from money. It means I get a lot of money. If I am rich, I could live in oversea for half of year or year!

Thank you! Thecher! See you next class!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Young! 

That's good to know that you are trying to be positive and enjoying life, even if it's always challenging. That's true! Let's try to stay away with negative people because they tend to ruin the mood in almost everything. 

I hope you become successful in the future together with your family. I also hope you can travel soon.

Thank you for sharing! I appreciate that.  See you tomorrow ^^

~Teacher Roanne ^_^
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Yes, I think I am happy. 
>> Correct!
Thinking that I am happy is important to living. 
>> Thinking that I am happy is important in living.
Think makes the behaviors. 
>> Correct! OR The way we think makes the behaviors. 
How to think decides the furture. 
>> How we think decides the future. 
I try to away from person who are negative in my life. 
>> I try to stay away from a person who are negative in my life. 
When I look back on my life. I was the lucky girl. 
>> When I look back on my life, I was the lucky girl. 
I have the deligent parents and fun 4 siblings. (I somtimes conficts with siblings but I love my family.)
>> I have diligent parents and 4 fun siblings. (I sometimes have conflicts with my siblings, but I love my family.)

I think that going to my way makes the happy. 
>> I think that going my way makes me happy. 
Not compare to other people, just going my way. 
>> Not comparing myself to other people, just going my way. 
To get the goal which I set makes the happy. 
>> To get the goal which I set makes me happy. OR To get the goal which I set makes the happiness. 
I set a goal to be rich unti I am 38 years old with my husband. 
>> I set a goal to be rich until I am 38 years old with my husband. 
I'm happy to doing with my husband.
>> I'm happy doing it with my husband.

I write down the answer about the question In last calss.
>> CI write down the answer on the question in the last class.
I have no experience in Europe. 
>> Correct!
Traveling Europe requires a long period and a lot of money. 
>> Correct!
I hope to travel Europe for a month. 
>> Correct!
I want to be free from money. It means I get a lot of money. 
>> Correct!
If I am rich, I could live in oversea for half of year or year!
>> If I am rich, I could live in oversea for half a year or a year!
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Thank you! Thecher! See you next class!
>> Thank you, Teacher! See you next class!

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