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Which greeting are typical in your country? What other ways could you think of to greet people?

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In my country, people say '¾È³ç'. When people meet any older person, thay say '¾È³çÇϼ¼¿ä'. But I don't say '¾È³ç'. I say 'hi!' when I meet my friends. Because I think that 'hi' is more friendly. I want to hang along with anyone easily. And in internet, people say other words such as '¾È´¨', 'ÇÏÀÌ' or 'ÇÏÀÌ¿°'. They think that words are cute, and actually they think that are unfriendly.

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Hi Sally, 
Every greeting and introduction is an opportunity to demonstrate respect for others and to create a favorable impression of yourself to others. When you greet someone, you acknowledge their presence. Most people do this automatically and barely notice they're doing it. And are some other ways to greet people Bump noses, air kiss on the cheek, rub noses or sometimes forehead, handshake, put your hand on your heart, bow, and other. 
Thank you for answering your essay.  ~ Teacher QUENNY..

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In my country, people say '¾È³ç'. When people meet any older person, thay say '¾È³çÇϼ¼¿ä'. But I don't say '¾È³ç'.
>> In my country, people say '¾È³ç'. When people meet an older person, they say '¾È³çÇϼ¼¿ä'. But I don't say '¾È³ç'.
 I say 'hi!' when I meet my friends. Because I think that 'hi' is more friendly.
>>  I say 'hi!' when I meet my friends because I think saying 'hi' is more friendly and formal. 
 I want to hang along with anyone easily. And in internet, people say other words such as '¾È´¨', 'ÇÏÀÌ' or 'ÇÏÀÌ¿°'. 
>>  I want to hang along with anyone easily and on the internet, people say other words such as '¾È´¨', 'ÇÏÀÌ' or 'ÇÏÀÌ¿°'. 
They think that words are cute, and actually they think that are unfriendly.
>> They think that words are cute, and actually, they think that they are unfriendly or informal. 
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In my country, people say '¾È³ç'. When people meet any older person, thay say '¾È³çÇϼ¼¿ä'. But I don't say '¾È³ç'. I say 'hi!' when I meet my friends. Because I think that 'hi' is more friendly. I want to hang along with anyone easily. And in internet, people say other words such as '¾È´¨', 'ÇÏÀÌ' or 'ÇÏÀÌ¿°'. They think that words are cute, and actually they think that are unfriendly.
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