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What questions do they ask when going through immigration at the airport? / What documents do you ne

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When I go through immigration at the airport the officer normally ask me where I come from, how long I'll stay in that country, and what my purpose of the visit is. Sometimes the officer gives out some extraordinary and more detailed questions in the case of emergency state such as an outbreak of terror, like the specific destination or accommodation, or whether I bring some items which need to be declared. etc.. I think all visitors or citizens have duty to answer and inform sincerely for the security and safe.
There are several types of documents for international travel. We should fill out a departure card first when we leave the country, and a disembarkation card and a quarantine report when entering the country, which we normally fill in onboard. The departure and disembarkation cards contain a personal information such as name, birth date, nationality, destination, lists of items which should be declared like animals, plants or foods, and a sum exceeding limit regulations.

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Hi Catherine,
Immigration or immigration control is the place at a port, airport, or international border where officials check the passports of people who wish to come into the country. At the counter, an officer will be verifying the passenger's passport and visa and might ask a few questions about the end destination. After verification, the passport is stamped with the departure date from India for the ongoing trip. Enjoy and always have a safe trip.  ~ Teacher QUENNY..
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When I go through immigration at the airport the officer normally ask me where I come from, how long I'll stay in that country, and what my purpose of the visit is. 
>> When I go through the immigration at the airport the officer normally asks me where I come from, how long I'll stay in that country, and what is my purpose for the visit to the country. 
Sometimes the officer gives out some extraordinary and more detailed questions in the case of emergency state such as an outbreak of terror, like the specific destination or accommodation, or whether I bring some items which need to be declared. etc.. I think all visitors or citizens have duty to answer and inform sincerely for the security and safe.
>> Sometimes the officer gives out some extraordinary and more detailed questions in the case of an emergency state such as an outbreak of terror, like the specific destination or accommodation, or whether I bring some items which need to be declared. etc. I think all visitors or citizens have the duty to answer and inform sincerely for security and safety. 
There are several types of documents for international travel. We should fill out a departure card first when we leave the country, and a disembarkation card and a quarantine report when entering the country, which we normally fill in onboard. 
>> There are several types of documents for international travel. We should fill out a departure card first when we leave the country, and a disembarkation card and a quarantine report when entering the country, which we normally fill in onboard. 
The departure and disembarkation cards contain a personal information such as name, birth date, nationality, destination, lists of items which should be declared like animals, plants or foods, and a sum exceeding limit regulations.
>> The departure and disembarkation cards contain a piece of personal information such as name, birth date, nationality, destination, lists of items which should be declared like animals, plants, or foods, and a sum exceeding limit regulations.
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When I go through immigration at the airport the officer normally ask me where I come from, how long I'll stay in that country, and what my purpose of the visit is. Sometimes the officer gives out some extraordinary and more detailed questions in the case of emergency state such as an outbreak of terror, like the specific destination or accommodation, or whether I bring some items which need to be declared. etc.. I think all visitors or citizens have duty to answer and inform sincerely for the security and safe.
There are several types of documents for international travel. We should fill out a departure card first when we leave the country, and a disembarkation card and a quarantine report when entering the country, which we normally fill in onboard. The departure and disembarkation cards contain a personal information such as name, birth date, nationality, destination, lists of items which should be declared like animals, plants or foods, and a sum exceeding limit regulations.
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