¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

4th homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*
2022-05-23 237

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Hello~ T. Roanne

This is my homework.

Q: Have you ever experienced culture shock?

A: Yes, I have that. when I first time visited a western country, people of that country say hello to me.
of course, they don't know me but they asked me say hello with smile. It feels so strange in our country, Korea.
After that, I had several experience of visiting there. I know it is very natural culture in a western country.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, Mr. Ho~

Thank you for answering the question and for sharing!

~T. Roanne ^_^
==============================================
Yes, I have that. 
>> Yes, I have experienced that. 
when I first time visited a western country, people of that country say hello to me.
>> When it was my first time visiting a western country, people of that country say hello to me.
of course, they don't know me but they asked me say hello with smile. 
>> Of course, they don't know me, but they greeted me with a hello and a smile. 
It feels so strange in our country, Korea.
>> Correct! 
After that, I had several experience of visiting there. I know it is very natural culture in a western country.
>> Correct! 
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
117447 Biggest goal in my life À±*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 279
117446 What are your weaknesses? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 612
117445 If you can change something in the past, what would it be? Share... ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 711
117444 What do you have in your bucket list? Write 5 examples with... Àå*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 604
117443 homework Á¤*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 2
117442 homework Á¤*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 202
117441 What should be avoided when traveling? ½Å*ÈÄ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 448
117440 When people are wealthy or successful, do they have a special... ¾ç*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 786
117439 What will video games be like in the future? ±è*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 836
117438 Catfish Ȳ*±¸ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 437
117437 3/16 homwork ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 584
117436 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 0
117435 HOMEWORK ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 2
117434 What are your weaknesses? Explain in detail. ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 0
117433 Homework ÀÌ*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 0
117432 HOMEWORK ¹è*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 412
117431 What is your favorite place? Why? ÀÌ*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 1
117430 Do you prefer reading, listening, speaking, or writing lessons?... Àü*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 455
117429 What are your weaknesses? Explain in detail. Ȳ*º° ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 198
117428 Do you prefer spending time with family or friends? ¼Û*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 1072

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04