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Using less is more important than returning single-used cups.

I try to reduce to use single -use cups in my office and at home.

When parents of my daughter's school do the meeting, we have to take tumbler.

That is our primise and conscience.

Monetary reward requires the other system and apps, process and manpower etc...

Too much burden to everyone.

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Great day, Ms. Lily!
Primarily, using less is a way to lessen our problems about trash. Your daughter's school is truly admirable that you have tis kidn of commitment. I hope that all schools and establishments will implement this kind of regulation,
Thanks for this! Take care~
Aki~
Using less is more important than returning single-used cups.
>>> CORRECT
I try to reduce to use single -use cups in my office and at home.
>>> CORRECT
When parents of my daughter's school do the meeting, we have to take tumbler.
>>> When parent's will have meeting in my daughter's school, we have to take our own tumbler.
That is our primise and conscience.
>>> That is our promise and commitment.
Monetary reward requires the other system and apps, process and manpower etc...
>>> CORRECT
Too much burden to everyone.
>>> CORRECT
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