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[Homework] Q. What modern gadget could you not live without?

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I strongly assure that most of people including me would say a smartphone as the reply of this question. In my case, my smartphone is always within being grabbed distance even while I fall asleep.

Since I live with my smartphone 24/7, it does a variety of tasks for me everyday. Its first task is to wake me up in the morning. I’m a kind of a person who can’t hear an alarm sound, so it make a sound loudly every 5 minutes over 10 times. And then, it shows me a daily news, advertisements and job openings which are helpful to me twice a day, 9:30am and 6pm. Also, it lets me not forget my schedules or other important things, and it plays my type of playlist at the same time. Furthermore, I can communicate with my family, friends and even my favorite artist through an app.

There are lots of things I can do by my smartphone as much as I can’t count all of it. It is not too much to say that my smartphone makes my life completely. It is very essential for living in this modern society.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good work, Sam! I am even prouder than you make a long and meaningful answer.-Faith-
I strongly assure that most of people including me would say a smartphone as the reply of this question. 
>> I strongly assure that most of the people including me would say a smartphone as a reply to this question. 
In my case, my smartphone is always within being grabbed distance even while I fall asleep.
>> In my case, my smartphone is always within striking distance even when I sleep.
Since I live with my smartphone 24/7, it does a variety of tasks for me everyday. 
>> Since I live with my smartphone 24/7, it does a variety of tasks for me every day. 
Its first task is to wake me up in the morning. 
>> CORRECT
I’m a kind of a person who can’t hear an alarm sound, so it make a sound loudly every 5 minutes over 10 times. 
>> I’m a kind of a person who can’t hear an alarm sound right away, so it makes a sound loudly every 5 minutes over 10 times. 
And then, it shows me a daily news, advertisements and job openings which are helpful to me twice a day, 9:30am and 6pm. 
>> And then, it shows me daily news, advertisements and job openings which are helpful to me twice a day at 9:30am and 6pm.
Also, it lets me not forget my schedules or other important things, and it plays my type of playlist at the same time.
>> Also, it lets me not forget my schedules or other important things and it plays my type of playlist at the same time.
Furthermore, I can communicate with my family, friends and even my favorite artist through an app.
>> CORRECT
OR In addition, we can get in touch with my family, friends and even my favorite artist through an app.
There are lots of things I can do by my smartphone as much as I can’t count all of it. 
>> CORRECT
It is not too much to say that my smartphone makes my life completely. 
>> It is not too much to say that my smartphone makes my life complete.
It is very essential for living in this modern society.
>> CORRECT
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