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No wonder I will speak English well because I will study English hard.

작성자: 김*준
2022-05-19 271

회원님의 영작문

I searched, recorded, and practiced.

She's a vegetarian and no wonder she's skinny.
I knew it, No wonder, There is no doubt that
No wonder he got sick.
No wonder you’re tired, you’ve been walking for hours.
They’ve lost 5 games in a row. No wonder the fans keep booing.
You have treated him really badly. No wonder he's upset.

No wonder our business is getting better because our employees work hard as if they were their own.
No wonder I will speak English well because I will study English hard.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon, Elliot! 

Thank you for answering the Homework question. Please take note of the corrections/ suggestions below: 

Writing Task: Kindly make at least 4 sentences using the phrase "No wonder."

Your Answer: I searched, recorded, and practiced.

She's a vegetarian and no wonder she's skinny.
I knew it, No wonder, There is no doubt that
No wonder he got sick.
No wonder you’re tired, you’ve been walking for hours.
They’ve lost 5 games in a row. No wonder the fans keep booing.
You have treated him really badly. No wonder he's upset.

No wonder our business is getting better because our employees work hard as if they were their own.
No wonder I will speak English well because I will study English hard.

Corrected Version: 

1. She's a vegetarian, no wonder she's skinny. <No need to use 'and,' simply use the comma.>

2. I knew it, No wonder, There is no doubt that <In this sentence, you don't need to use the phrase, 'no wonder.' Instead, you can say, "I knew it! There was no doubt about it."> 

3. No wonder he got sick. <CORRECT.> 

4. No wonder you’re tired, you’ve been walking for hours. <CORRECT.> 

5. They’ve lost 5 games in a row, no wonder the fans are booing them. <You can combine the two sentences into 1 by using the comma.>

6. You have treated him really badly. No wonder he's upset. <CORRECT. You can also combine these two sentence into 1 by using a comma.> 

7. No wonder our business is getting better because our employees work hard as if they were their own. <Our employees are working hard as if it is their own business, no wonder we are getting better.> 
<The situation/ condition is usually placed first in the sentence, and then the phrase "no wonder" follows.> 

8. No wonder I will speak English well because I will study English hard. <We usually use the phrase "no wonder" to talk about situations that has already happened or are happening in the present. You can improve this sentence by stating it like this: I study English everyday, no wonder my pronunciation is already improving.> 

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Thank you for taking the time and effort to answer the homework. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me about them in class. See you later!~ 

-Teacher Miya~
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