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How would you introduce South Korea to other countries?

작성자: 황*하
2022-05-19 285

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Korea is well known of K-pop, drama and even fashion these days. There weren't any famous celebrities to the world but Singer, Psy had been famous through Youtube video, Kangnam style, after that many people have been interested in my country. There was limited sources to introduce movies, songs and so on. However, it becomes normal to upload video contents to streming service sites because it is the fastest way to advertise smoethings and free of charge. There are a lot of K-culture fans around world due to the reason above. People are willing to learn Korean language and culture because they would like to know about our country more and may come to Korea someday. It is also true that public transportations are extremely convenient compare to any countries, especially subway systems. Koreans usually eat rice with side dishes that is uncommon other countires. Tourists are shocked if they go to Korean restaurants, because all side dishes are free. Delivery services are fast and easy to

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Korea is well known of K-pop, drama and even fashion these days. 
>> CORRECT!
There weren't any famous celebrities to the world but Singer, Psy had been famous through Youtube video, Kangnam style, after that many people have been interested in my country.
>> There weren't any famous celebrities to the world but Singer, Psy had been famous through Youtube video, Kangnam style, after that many people have been interested in my country.
There was limited sources to introduce movies, songs and so on. 
>> There were limited sources to introduce movies, songs and so on. 
However, it becomes normal to upload video contents to streming service sites because it is the fastest way to advertise smoethings and free of charge.
>> However, it becomes normal to upload video contents to streaming service sites because it is the fastest way to advertise something, free of charge.
There are a lot of K-culture fans around world due to the reason above. 
>> There are a lot of K-culture fans around the world due to the reasons above. 
People are willing to learn Korean language and culture because they would like to know about our country more and may come to Korea someday. 
>> People are willing to learn the Korean language and culture because they would like to know about our country more and may come to Korea someday. 
It is also true that public transportations are extremely convenient compare to any countries, especially subway systems. 
>> CORRECT!
Koreans usually eat rice with side dishes that is uncommon other countires. 
>> Koreans usually eat rice with side dishes that is uncommon in other countries. 
Tourists are shocked if they go to Korean restaurants, because all side dishes are free. 
>> CORRECT!
Delivery services are fast and easy to
>>  Delivery services are fast and easy to use.
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