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What motivates you in wanting to make books?

작성자: 김*연
2022-05-18 105

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I manage many kinds of books because of my job. I also have many chances to meet the authors. So, time goes by, I dreamed to be an author. The specific reasons are these. First, I have various stories in my life. I want to write about it and hope to remember forever. There are not only good stories but also bad and sad stories. However, I believe writing about me will help people's indirect experiences. Second, I want to be a specialist in my job. I think making book is also one of the ways to express one's expert. My carrer is almost 18 years now. I have many examples about teaching, reading and making events. So I want to share it with others. Last, I have a dream that I have my own book after retirement. One day, a student asked me what is your dream after retirement. I thought about it for some times. It didn't occur to me in hurry. At last, just one thought was remained to me. It was the hope after retirement. These reasons are my motivations to make books.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Arissa,

Thank you once again for submitting your answer.
I appreciate you for sharing the reasons why you want to make books. 
I highly respect all the reasons you provided especially the reason of sharing your personal stories to others.
I believe that through this, the readers will learn a lot about you and most especially, about life. 
As a reader of various books, I also know that reading or knowing the experiences or stories of others could help me discover myself more. 
I think your future readers would have that kind of experience too. 
I wish you all the best so you can create your own book and more books in the future. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


I manage many kinds of books because of my job. I also have many chances to meet the authors. So, time goes by, I dreamed to be an author. The specific reasons are these. First, I have various stories in my life. I want to write about it and hope to remember forever. There are not only good stories but also bad and sad stories. However, I believe writing about me will help people's indirect experiences. Second, I want to be a specialist in my job. I think making book is also one of the ways to express one's expert. My carrer is almost 18 years now. I have many examples about teaching, reading and making events. So I want to share it with others. Last, I have a dream that I have my own book after retirement. One day, a student asked me what is your dream after retirement. I thought about it for some times. It didn't occur to me in hurry. At last, just one thought was remained to me. It was the hope after retirement. These reasons are my motivations to make books.

>> I manage many kinds of books because of my job. I also have many chances to meet the authors. So, as time goes by, I dreamt to be an author. The specific reasons are these. First, I have various stories about my life. I want to write about them and hope to remember them forever. There are not only good stories but also bad and sad stories. However, I believe writing about me will help people's indirect experiences. Second, I want to be a specialist in my job. I think making a book is also one of the ways to express one's expertise. My career is almost 18 years now. I have many examples of teaching, reading, and making events. So I want to share it with others. Last, I have a dream that is to have my own book after retirement. One day, a student asked me, 'what is your dream after retirement?' I thought about it for some time. It didn't occur to me in a hurry. At last, just one thought remained for me. It was the hope after retirement. These reasons are my motivations to make books.
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