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What is the most fun childhood memory that you had? Answer in a few sentences.

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When I was a kindergartner, I had a role of acting a teacher in the school play about my future job. This memory reminds me that my childhood was full of fun and activeness.

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Hi there, Judy!

I remember having the same experience! It's very interesting that you played the role of being a teacher before. You must have been really cute! Well, our childhood dreams may or may not come true. One thing is for sure, we can create big dreams and make them come true.

Anyway, study your first sentence well and note down my suggestions well. Great job!

Have a great night!

-T. Donna =) 

When I was a kindergartner, I had a role of acting a teacher in the school play about my future job. 
>> When I was a kindergartner, I had a role of acting like a teacher in a school play about my future job. 

This memory reminds me that my childhood was full of fun and activeness.
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