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What is your opinion about “edu-sitters”? Do you think they are helpful? Why or why not?

작성자: 황*하
2022-05-17 294

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I believe that every person can be teacher to children. Edu-sitters can also teach something like correct way to eat, speak and construct right habbit but I am not sure if they can help children studying various subjects. Their main role is looking after children and then if they have spare time, they can provide some education. I don't think it is easy to do more than two roles. Some parents in my country hire foreigner as nanny because they want their babies to learn english natually. I think it is effective method to learn languages. However, workers would like to write down their duties in detail when they make a contract. It means that every chores can be the source of salary increase. It is the main expenses that parents encountered if couples are working together. The government has implemented variety of measures but it is not enough to solve these problems. Baby-sitter, edu-sitter and sitters can be helpful if parents don't have a financial burdun.

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I believe that every person can be teacher to children. 
>> I believe that every person can be a teacher to children. 
OR >> I believe every person has the ability to teach children.
Edu-sitters can also teach something like correct way to eat, speak and construct right habbit but I am not sure if they can help children studying various subjects. 
>> Edu-sitters can also teach something like the correct way to eat, speak and construct right habits, but I am not sure if they can help children in studying various subjects. 
Their main role is looking after children and then if they have spare time, they can provide some education. 
>> Their main role is to look after the children and then if they have spare time, they can provide some education. 
I don't think it is easy to do more than two roles. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I am pretty sure that it's a difficult thing to have more than two roles.
Some parents in my country hire foreigner as nanny because they want their babies to learn english natually. 
>> Some parents in my country hire a foreigner as nanny because they want their babies to learn English natually. 
OR >> Some parents in Korea hire foreigners as nannies for the reason that they want their kids to learn English naturally.
I think it is effective method to learn languages. 
>> I think it is an effective method to learn languages. 
However, workers would like to write down their duties in detail when they make a contract. 
>> CORRECT!
It means that every chores can be the source of salary increase. 
>> CORRECT!
It is the main expenses that parents encountered if couples are working together. 
>> It is one of the main expenses that parents encounter, especially if they are both working parents.
The government has implemented variety of measures but it is not enough to solve these problems. 
>> CORRECT!
Baby-sitter, edu-sitter and sitters can be helpful if parents don't have a financial burdun.
>> Baby-sitter, edu-sitter and sitters can be helpful if parents don't have a financial burden.

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