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What is the most memorable birthday you\'ve ever had?

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When I was at high school, My friend who picked a new car locked me in the trunk because It was my birthday. And then He was practicing cornering in an empty parking lot. At that time, I remember being like this and that in the trunk, So this is the most memorable birthday memory.

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Hi Elic! 

Oh, dear. Were you okay during that time? HAHAHAHAHA!

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

When I was at high school, My friend who picked a new car locked me in the trunk because It was my birthday. 
>> When I was in high school, my friend who picked a new car locked me in the trunk because it was my birthday. 

And then He was practicing cornering in an empty parking lot. 
>>  He was practicing cornering me in an empty parking lot. 

At that time, I remember being like this and that in the trunk, So this is the most memorable birthday memory.
>> At that time, I remember what it was like being in the trunk so this is the most memorable birthday memory that I have. 

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