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For sure, I really want to play a basketball with my old friends outside. But we can't do it in this pandemic situation. We had played it at middle and high school during every lunch break time, And we used to play it when we became an adult, So I miss it.

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Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

For sure, I really want to play a basketball with my old friends outside.
>> For sure, I really want to play basketball with my old friends outside.

 But we can't do it in this pandemic situation. 
>> Unfortunately, we can't do it due to the pandemic. 

We had played it at middle and high school during every lunch break time. 
>> We used to play it a lot during break time when I was a middle school and high school student. 

And we used to play it when we became an adult, So I miss it.
>> We still play it even if we're already adults so I miss it. 
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