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What\'s your favorite gadget? Please some details in the next class.

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Air-fryer is a one of my favorite gadgets. Because whenever I prepare food to eat, it makes me comfortable.
And if I don't have any way but fire when I cook, I should wait for it to be hot.
What if I use a air-fryer? I just set a timer and go to take a shower.
What a convenient.

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Hello Ian,
Thank you for sending in your homework.
Please keep up the good work.
Have an awesome day.
Teacher ELLY.
What's your favorite gadget? Please some details in the next class.
Air-fryer is a one of my favorite gadgets. 
>>The air-fryer is one of my favorite gadgets. 
Because whenever I prepare food to eat, it makes me comfortable.
>>Because, whenever I prepare my food, it gives me some comfort.
And if I don't have any way but fire when I cook, I should wait for it to be hot.
>>And if there's no other way of cooking except with a gas stove, I should wait for it to heat up.
What if I use a air-fryer? 
>>What if I use an air-fryer? 
I just set a timer and go to take a shower.
>>I just set a timer and I go take a shower.
What a convenient.
What a convenience.
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