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What is the most famous female sport in your country? Why?

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I think the most famous female sport is volleyball.
Because rarely held the female's sports game.
Volleyball can commonly watching on TV.
Yeonkyung Kim is the most famous volleyball player.
She is ranked No.1 in the world. She is belong to Shanghai team.

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Thank you for giving me new information, Emily! Do you like playing volleyball? It's really fun!-Faith-
I think the most famous female sport is volleyball.
>> CORRECT
Because rarely held the female's sports game.
>> It's because it is the frequently held sports game.
Volleyball can commonly watching on TV.
>> Volleyball is commonly watched on TV.
Yeonkyung Kim is the most famous volleyball player.
>> In addition, Yeonkyung Kim is the most famous volleyball player.
She is ranked No.1 in the world. 
>> She is ranked no.1 in the world. 
 She is belong to Shanghai team.
>> She belongs to Shanghai team.
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