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I don't think kids these days are having a better childhood than my generation. Because these days it's hard to play outside because of the corona virus, and the internet is so developed that kids learn bad things too quickly.

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Hello,  Sheila! ^^
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I don't think kids these days are having a better childhood than my generation. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because these days it's hard to play outside because of the corona virus, and the internet is so developed that kids learn bad things too quickly.
>>> Because these days it's hard to play outside because of the coronavirus, and the internet is so developed that kids learn bad things too quickly.
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