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What (besides good food) makes a restaurant great?

작성자: 황*하
2022-05-06 113

회원님의 영작문

Many people want to be different compared to others. It leads people to purchase the items made by luxury brands because they can show off their financial status. There is active movement that famous brand in worldwide have launched the restaurants. Customers are curious about its atmosphere and food. I believe that many people are willing to visit there, even though food price is incredibly expensive. Some people might spend more money than their usual consumption. It might be over their monthly budget. However, they want to get experienced what new features are. Other people are already affordable to spend money, so they might not want many people have same experience because they want to be special and unique. Most businesses know what customers want to do, when they would like to spend their money. I think that It is human's basic desire although, people deny true.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Many people want to be different compared to others. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> People want to be unique.
It leads people to purchase the items made by luxury brands because they can show off their financial status. 
>> CORRECT!
There is active movement that famous brand in worldwide have launched the restaurants.
>> There is an active movement that famous brands worldwide have launched their restaurants.
 Customers are curious about its atmosphere and food. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Customers are curious about the restaurant's food and ambiance.
I believe that many people are willing to visit there, even though food price is incredibly expensive.
>> CORRECT!
Some people might spend more money than their usual consumption. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Some people might spend more money than their usual spending.
It might be over their monthly budget. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The amount could exceed their total monthly budget.
However, they want to get experienced what new features are. 
>> However, they want to get a hold of the experience on what the new features are. 
OR >> However, they want to experience on what's new. 
Other people are already affordable to spend money, so they might not want many people have same experience because they want to be special and unique. 
>> Other people could already afford to spend money, so they might not want many people have the same experience because they want to be special and unique. 
Most businesses know what customers want to do, when they would like to spend their money. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Most businesses know what customers want to do, when and where they would like to spend their own money. 
I think that It is human's basic desire although, people deny true.
>> I think that it is a human's basic desire although, people deny what's true.
OR >> I think that it is a human's basic desire although, people deny the truth.


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