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HW - What was your most memorable experience with your grandmother in your childhood days?
When I was really little, like 6 or 7, I used to stay at my grandma's house because my parents were busy working and didn't have enough time that they could take care of me. Her place was a little far from my place and it was countryside. I frankly don't remember visiting her place in details now but the pictures I took there help to remind me about those memories. My grandmother always took me to the hair shop first and got me a super cute perm that I had never gotten before. Also, I could hang out with my cousins who were staying there as well and we had so much fun eating lots of food, swimming, running and doing everything that we wanted to do. I think that is the very moment that I really cherish to this day. I hope my grandmother stays healthy and she's my side forever all the time as always.

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While reading your experience with your grandmother, I suddenly thought of my late maternal grandmother. I hope you have more moments with your her. -Faith-
HW - What was your most memorable experience with your grandmother in your childhood days?
>> CORRECT
When I was really little, like 6 or 7, I used to stay at my grandma's house because my parents were busy working and didn't have enough time that they could take care of me.
>> When I was really little, like 6 or 7, I used to stay at my grandma's house because my parents were busy working and didn't have enough time to take care of me.
Her place was a little far from my place and it was countryside. 
>> Her place was a little far from my place and it was in the countryside.
I frankly don't remember visiting her place in details now but the pictures I took there help to remind me about those memories. 
>> I frankly don't remember visiting her place in detail now but the pictures I took there help to remind me about those memories. 
My grandmother always took me to the hair shop first and got me a super cute perm that I had never gotten before. 
>> CORRECT
Also, I could hang out with my cousins who were staying there as well and we had so much fun eating lots of food, swimming, running and doing everything that we wanted to do. 
>> CORRECT
I think that is the very moment that I really cherish to this day. 
>> CORRECT
OR I really cherish that moment until now. 
I hope my grandmother stays healthy and she's my side forever all the time as always.
>> I hope my grandmother stays healthy and be by my side forever.
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