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1. Do you like science?
Yes. I like it because it¡¯s exciting even though I don¡¯t understand exactly.
con)Discovering the rules of things close to our lives makes us expect a better life. It is how interesting.
2. When did you start to learn about science?
I think it¡¯s when I started asking parents everything I saw.
con)I was curious about the world I lived, and it is still the same now.
3. Which science subject is interesting to you?
I am very curious in things about the universe . It¡¯s the most mysterious subject.
con) It's inspires the imagination.
4. What kinds of interesting things have you done with science?
I make stories based on scientific imagination. It's interesting that there's a possibility that it might be true by adding imagination to the parts we don't know. It's fun even if it's not.

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Hello there, Alice!

These answers are great! Thank you for taking notes in class on how you could make them better in answering in these questions in the speaking test of IELTS.

Make sure to make them longer in a more meaningful way. See you on the next set of topic!

Have a good weekend!

-T. Donna =)

1. Do you like science?
Yes. I like it because it¡¯s exciting even though I don¡¯t understand exactly.
>> Correct!
Or: Yes. I like it because it¡¯s exciting even though I don¡¯t understand it exactly.

con)Discovering the rules of things close to our lives makes us expect a better life. 
>> Correct!

It is how interesting.
>> It is that interesting.

2. When did you start to learn about science?
I think it¡¯s when I started asking parents everything I saw.
>> I think it¡¯s when I started asking my parents about everything I saw.

con)I was curious about the world I lived, and it is still the same now.
>> Correct!

3. Which science subject is interesting to you?
I am very curious in things about the universe . 
>> Correct!

It¡¯s the most mysterious subject.
>> Correct!

con) It's inspires the imagination.
>> It inspires the imagination.

4. What kinds of interesting things have you done with science?
I make stories based on scientific imagination. 
>> Correct!
Or: It is making stories based on scientific imagination. 

It's interesting that there's a possibility that it might be true by adding imagination to the parts we don't know. 
>> Correct!

It's fun even if it's not.
>> Correct!
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