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Most of my vacations are with my family or friends, but sometimes I think I need time to think about traveling alone.

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Great morning, Jade!
Traveling alone is somewhat scary for me, Hahaha! However, I heard from some people who had an experience traveling by themselves that it gives them serenity and allows them to appreciate other cultures because they only focused on the country itself and do not mind their companions.
Thank you for this. Try to express yourself more in writing :)
Have a great weekend.
Aki~
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