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If you can recommend a Korean dish to a foreigner, what would it be and why?

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2022-05-05 89

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local foods in South Korea it refers that a various different characters that we can taste. lets think Korea geologically. South Korea is a peninsular where covered mountains and the peninsular surrounded by the oceans. so each regions have their especial food because of the weather or the temperature and custom due to those reasons.
so I strongly recommend choose the province for the first step. for example, place where face oceans at east, south, west they have different food culture because of the fishes they can fish is different. East Sea, we can fish squid but the others. at the south there a lot of islands and strong current makes a variety kinds of seafood resource and the west has got a big tidal makes a vast mud beach can harvesting shells. those differences make specific food culture which distinguished.
we can say having foods in different country is relatively experience its custom and culture. for those reasons, first of all, I recommend people to choose the region, pr

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Lim! 

Yes, each place has it own culture and specialty. They are mostly known for that that's why we need to consider them first. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon

local foods in South Korea it refers that a various different characters that we can taste. 
>> The local foods in South Korea refers to different kinds of characters that we can taste. 

lets think Korea geologically. 
>> Let's think about South Korea geologically. 

South Korea is a peninsular where covered mountains and the peninsular surrounded by the oceans. 
>> South Korea is a peninsular that is covered by mountains and oceans. 

so each regions have their especial food because of the weather or the temperature and custom due to those reasons.
>> This is why each region has their special food because of the weather and seasons. It's differs depending on these things. 

so I strongly recommend choose the province for the first step. 
>> So, I strongly recommend to choose the province first as the first step. 

for example, place where face oceans at east, south, west they have different food culture because of the fishes they can fish is different. 
>> For example, places near the oceans are at the south and east. At the west part, they have different food and culture because of the abundance of fish. 

East Sea, we can fish squid but the others. 
>> At the East sea, we can fish for squids and other sea food. 

at the south there a lot of islands and strong current makes a variety kinds of seafood resource and the west has got a big tidal makes a vast mud beach can harvesting shells. 
>> At the South, there are a lot of island and the current is strong which is good for catching different kinds of seafood. The West has big tidal waves with makes harvesting shells efficient. 

those differences make specific food culture which distinguished.
>> Those differences make specific food culture which we distinguished. 

we can say having foods in different country is relatively experience its custom and culture. 
>> We can say that trying food from different  countries is a relative experience of their custom and culture. 

for those reasons, first of all, I recommend people to choose the region. 
>> Because of these reasons, a person should pick the region they want to go to first. 
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