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I will recommend Korean ramen to foreigner. Becuase I think Korean ramen is very delicious and foreginers can eat it deliciously.

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Hi Alex! 

 That sounds delicious. 

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I will recommend Korean ramen to foreigner.
>> I will recommend Korean ramen to foreigners. 

 Becuase I think Korean ramen is very delicious and foreginers can eat it deliciouslya
>> It is because I think it's very delicious and foreigners will think the same way. 
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