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If you can recommend a Korean dish to a foreigner, what would it be and why?

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What I recommend, It's a Samgyetang. Because the summer season will be coming in South Korea, we will eat it as a summer health food, so I want to recommend it to foreigners. And Chicken soup is prepared and boiled in broth. :)

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Hi Elic! 

Samgyetang is one of the best dishes in South Korea. Great choice! 

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What I recommend, It's a Samgyetang. Because the summer season will be coming in South Korea, we will eat it as a summer health food, so I want to recommend it to foreigners. 
>> I will recommend "Samgyetang" because the summer season will come in South Korea.  We usually eat this healthy dish during the summer season so I want to recommend it to foreigners. 

And Chicken soup is prepared and boiled in broth. :)
>> And chicken soup is prepared and boiled in broth. :)

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