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What makes reading enjoyable for you?

작성자: 김*연
2022-05-02 137

회원님의 영작문

First, I have a precious memory about reading. When I was a high school student, I read a full-length novel which is 16 books named 'A Land(Ground)'. So I got praised from teacher. It was my first happy memory about reading. I felt happiness that I am approved by reading.
Second, I found that the students can change into good way by reading. Some students recognized their fault and regreted their own wrongdoings. They made turn into the good way by reading.
Lastly, I met the intersting charactors and authors in books. They are admirable people. I can see the various human-reletionship and meet the enormous the author's knowledge.
So reading always make me happy and enjoyably.
p.s. Is it right that I write this homework here? Well anyway, thany you for reading. *^^*

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Arissa,

Thank you for submitting your answer. I really appreciate it. 
Yes, you're right of submitting your homework here. ^^

I appreciate your answer as you have shared the reasons why reading is your happiness.
It's also heartwarming to know that some students changed for the better after reading. 
A book indeed is full of wisdom that could inspire and motivate its readers.

By the way, I corrected/edited your answer to make it better. They are the ones in red. 

Thank you again and have a good night! See you on Wednesday! 

~ Teacher Gina

First, I have a precious memory about reading. When I was a high school student, I read a full-length novel which is 16 books named 'A Land(Ground)'. So I got praised from teacher. It was my first happy memory about reading. I felt happiness that I am approved by reading.
Second, I found that the students can change into good way by reading. Some students recognized their fault and regreted their own wrongdoings. They made turn into the good way by reading.
Lastly, I met the intersting charactors and authors in books. They are admirable people. I can see the various human-reletionship and meet the enormous the author's knowledge.
So reading always make me happy and enjoyably.
p.s. Is it right that I write this homework here? Well anyway, thany you for reading. *^^*


>> First, I have a precious memory of reading. When I was a high school student, I read a full-length novel which is 16 books named 'A Land(Ground)'. So I got praised by the teacher. It was my first happy memory of reading. I felt happy that I was approved by reading.
Second, I found that the students can change into a good way by reading. Some students recognized their faults and regretted their wrongdoings. They made a turn into a good way of reading.
Lastly, I met the interesting characters and authors in books. They are admirable people. I can see the various human-relationship and meet the enormous the author's knowledge.
So reading always makes me happy and enjoyable.
p.s. Is it right that I write this homework here? Well anyway, thank you for reading. 


>> Or: First, I have a precious memory of reading. When I was a high school student, I read a full-length novel about 16 books named 'A Land(Ground)'. So I got praised by the teacher. It was my first happy memory of reading. I felt pleased that I was approved by it.
Second, I found that the students can change into a good way by reading. Some students recognized their faults and regretted their wrongdoings. They made a turn into a good way of reading.
Lastly, I met the exciting characters and authors in books. They are admirable people. I can see the various human-relationship and meet the enormous the author's knowledge.
So reading always makes me happy and enjoyable.
p.s. Is it correct that I write this homework here? Well, anyway, thank you for reading. 
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