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My last adventure

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My adventure is to cook new food.
A few weeks ago, I decided to challenge a new dish, È£¹ÚÁ×.
I like all kinds of Á×.
The materials of that È£¹ÚÁ× were pumpkin, rice, beans, milk and others.
Making new food is a hard adventure for me.
The process of making È£¹ÚÁ× was very complicated and took a long time.
However, it wasn't that bad.
Therefore I thought I'd try another food next time.

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Hi Eun Ha!
It's been a while.
I hope you can become consistent this time.
There are a couple of things you need to remember in the composition.
We'll discuss them more tomorrow.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My adventure is to cook new food.
>> My adventure was cooking a new dish.
A few weeks ago, I decided to challenge a new dish, È£¹ÚÁ×.
>> A few weeks ago, I decided to take the challenge of preparing a new dish, È£¹ÚÁ×.
I like all kinds of Á×.
>> Correct
The materials of that È£¹ÚÁ× were pumpkin, rice, beans, milk and others.
>> The ingredients of È£¹ÚÁ× are pumpkin, rice, beans, milk and others.
Making new food is a hard adventure for me.
>> Preparing new dishes is a hard adventure for me.
The process of making È£¹ÚÁ× was very complicated and took a long time.
>> The process of cooking È£¹ÚÁ× was very complicated and it took a long time to finish.
Therefore I thought I'd try another food next time.
>> Therefore I thought I'd try another dish next time.
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