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It is trust that the most important quality between friends. When friends cannot believe each other, they cannot last their friendship. Two years ago, my friend said that she could not hang out with me because she would visit her parents house where it was far from her house. I believed her, so we did not meet at that time. When I called her at that time when she had a plan fot visiting the house, she pretended to be with her parents. However, I suddenly felt a strange feeling, so I asked her to do video chat. In a video clip, she stayed in her own room. I was shocked about her lie. The reason why she lied is she just wanted to take a rest without disappointing me. With this experience, I kept doubting her. The relationship was over. In conclusion, I am sure that trust is the most worth quality between friends.

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Hello Sophia. I agree with you about trust. Being able to have trust and confidence in your friend is one of the most important requirements of a strong relationship because true friendship means you are able to count on one another. ~T. Lyn
It is trust that the most important quality between friends.
>>The most important quality among friends is trust.
When friends cannot believe each other, they cannot last their friendship.
>>Friendships cannot last if they cannot trust each other.
Two years ago, my friend said that she could not hang out with me because she would visit her parents house where it was far from her house.
>>Two years ago, a friend of mine told me she couldn't hang out with me because she had to visit her parents far away from home.
I believed her, so we did not meet at that time.
>>We didn't meet then because I trusted her.
When I called her at that time when she had a plan fot visiting the house, she pretended to be with her parents.
>>I called her to ask her if she had a plan to visit me in the house but she pretended to be with her parents.
However, I suddenly felt a strange feeling, so I asked her to do video chat.
>>But suddenly I felt strange and asked for a video chat.
In a video clip, she stayed in her own room.
>>In the video, she just stayed in her own room.
I was shocked about her lie.
>>I was shocked by her lies.
The reason why she lied is she just wanted to take a rest without disappointing me.
>>She lied because she just wanted to rest without disappointing me.
With this experience, I kept doubting her.
>>This experience keeps me skeptical of her.
The relationship was over.
>>Our relationship as friends is over.
In conclusion, I am sure that trust is the most worth quality between friends.
>>In conclusion, I am convinced that the most valuable quality among friends is trust.
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