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If you can recommend a Korean dish to a foreigner, what would it be and why?

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If I have that chance, I would like to recommend Bulgogi and Kimchi.
First, Bulgogi¡¯s sauce consists of soy sauce and sugar so it¡¯s not spicy to everyone. That¡¯s why foreigners can try and enjoy it easily. Its cooking ingredients and recipe are also common and easy so foreigners can make it easily at home. I think they will want to eat it again if they taste it just one time.
Next, I recommend Kimchi. There are various kinds of Kimchi in Korea. Although it could feel spicy for foreigners to taste it, I think Kimchi is the most scientific and representative Korean dish. I really realized it when I make it by myself in Canada. Because fermentation makes Kimchi¡¯s flavor amazing. I want to know about Kimchi's greatness to many foreigners. Besides the two dishes, there are a lot of delicious Korean dishes that I want to recommend.

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Hi Chloe! 

Those are my two favorite Korean dishes. They are so good and a staple representative of South Korea. 

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If I have that chance, I would like to recommend Bulgogi and Kimchi.
>> CORRECT

First, Bulgogi¡¯s sauce consists of soy sauce and sugar so it¡¯s not spicy to everyone. 
>> CORRECT

That¡¯s why foreigners can try and enjoy it easily. 
>> CORRECT

Its cooking ingredients and recipe are also common and easy so foreigners can make it easily at home. 
>>CORRECT

I think they will want to eat it again if they taste it just one time.
>> CORRECT

Next, I recommend Kimchi. 
>> CORRECT

There are various kinds of Kimchi in Korea. 
>> There are various kinds of Kimchi in South Korea. 

Although it could feel spicy for foreigners to taste it, I think Kimchi is the most scientific and representative Korean dish. 
>> Although it could be spicy for some foreigners, I still think that Kimchi is the most scientific and the best representative dish of South Korea. 

I really realized it when I make it by myself in Canada. 
>> I really realized it when I made it by myself in Canada. 

Because fermentation makes Kimchi¡¯s flavor amazing. 
>> It's because fermentation makes Kimchi¡¯s flavor amazing. 

I want to know about Kimchi's greatness to many foreigners. 
>> I want many foreigners to know how great kimchi is. 

Besides the two dishes, there are a lot of delicious Korean dishes that I want to recommend.
>> CORRECT
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